Stop Hurting

August 4, 2010
By Maryy BRONZE, El Paso, Texas
Maryy BRONZE, El Paso, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"And I am grateful. Because life is an ugly, awful place to not have a best friend" -Sarah Dessen


Close your eyes
Breathe in that deep air
Let it take your breath away
And let yourself go

Don't worry about anything
Nothing at all
Clear your mind
And let your worries disappear

Sink into a dream
Let reality vanish
Remember that I am here by your side
To hold your hand and get you through this

Just let it all go
Release your fears
And forget empty promises
Everything will return to normal

But promise me one thing
Thats all I ask
One little favor... promise me
You'll stop hurting


The author's comments:
One of my friends best friends had been having a rough time with his past girlfriend. She had been just giving him the worst a girl could ever do to a guy. I never realized a guy could get this hurt. Even though I had only seen him a couple of times and I didn't know much about him, I felt for him. I just want people to realize boys can get just as hurt as girls.

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on Jan. 12 2011 at 10:06 am
Smickles PLATINUM, Buffalo Grove, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There is a reason that the people from your past did not make it to your future

:P

i love it! it makes me feel like I  have someone helping me through a crisis, like their talking to me! keep writing like this, because i love your style

on Sep. 17 2010 at 5:57 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

wow, I love how conversational this is. even though it was about someone else's boy, this could even go to one you're in a relationship... good stuff. read some of mine?

on Sep. 17 2010 at 11:07 am
SecretSasha SILVER, Cibolo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"It doesn't matter how slow you go as long as you don't stop"

I love this poem, I can feel your caring show through the lines of the poem. Keep writing!




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