This Void

August 13, 2010
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what to do
i feel blue
I want to love
and be free as a dove
but Im here in the dark
never left my mark
on this world so cold
I just can't be bold
I need strength
to take me the length
to finish the race
at this insane pace
I cant do it alone
my fear has been shown
I cry out in the dark
and hark I hear someone-
will they help
or call me whelp
I pray not to die
I think I should fly
but I cant
I shan't
I must know the truth
so call me uncouth
I stumble I fall
in the end I crawl
what awaits me in this void
Will I be destroyed...

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talking-with-silence said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 2:19 pm
Hulo, whoa. Weird I feel just like that rigth now. Really not kidding. Boy issues (I sigh). For some  reson this reminded me of The Who's song "Behind Blue eyes". Since you have this pain and you don't want it to show and it dose and it getts to the point where ou feel so bad you just don't care anymore. Nummmmbnnnnnessss. As I would call it. Yeah I trip allot to. I like it. I love the line "finish the race at this insane pace". YOu are a magnificent writer. Never forget it ;)
A-Soul-Exposed replied...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 9:20 pm
yeah that sums up what my feelings were at the time. and I do happen to have blue eyes. And thank you. I do what I can.
talking-with-silence replied...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 1:27 pm
Yeah writing helps as a vent. Feelings are odd things but we have to respect them. They have power. Oh really :) Cool. What colour blue? Mine are blue-greenish. Kinda weird cause 2/3 is blue and 1/3 is slighty greener than the rest. Welcome :D Yeah we all do what we can... Well some of us anyway.
A-Soul-Exposed replied...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 10:43 pm
Yeah for sure. well mine chainge colour depending on the lighting and my mood they rainge from a nice light blue to a dark blue. also with a little green mixed into the middle.
talking-with-silence replied...
Sept. 22, 2010 at 11:06 am
Mine do all that to lamo. Sounds pretty cool :D
A-Soul-Exposed replied...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 9:25 pm
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