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August 13, 2010
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Lost in the dark

Never made my mark

Alone and afraid

Guess that just why I was made

So everyone can look at me

And see exactly what they don't wanna be

A miserable piece of sh**

Who's taken a hit

Now alone in the mud

From my heart I spert blood

But no one sees, they don't pay no mind

No one has the time anymore to be kind

Its a dreary dark world

Onto which I've been hurled

Selfishness thrives

Love barely survives

It's choked, Its drowned out

By the ongoing shout

Of fights in every home

It's like living in an airless dome

You gasp for air

But it just ain't there

You choke and turn blue

There's nothing you can do

Your being smothered

You've never been mothered

sympathy doesn't exist

Everyone just gets pissed

At every little thing

They take a small problem and fling

It out of proportion


Gas prices are to high

To many people die

From daily suicide

There is no guide

To live in this place

Its just a rat race

So do all you can

Maybe even make a 5 year plan

Sort out your life

And put down that knife

You wont need it no more

Just walk out that door

Let no one look down on you

Or ever tell you what to do

Just be the best you can be

And I promise your life will fill with glee.

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talking-with-silence said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 3:21 pm
awh! How could they not like that line???? Sounds awesome though anyway.
talking-with-silence said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 3:18 pm
Ture so true. I don't think killing your self is ever the way out. Hah I can't even plan the next 5 hours let alone minutes. I am trying to just be me now. I stopped caring about what ppl normally think cause- none of them care about me. It is a rat race. And you forgot (jk) a POPULARITY CONTESt. Sigh. I hope we can both be areselfs. Cause your right I have thought and felt the same things. Its all you can do :)
A-Soul-Exposed replied...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 9:06 pm
No it is not. I mean a few years ago I used to cut. and then once I got out of it I wrote this.
talking-with-silence replied...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 5:11 pm
No it shure isn't but I must say it does come into mind some times and seem like the best and only option. The sycy has odd ways of dealing with pain that subside with all of humans natural instincts. I guess in light sometimes mind over matter is not to a degree a good thing. Ah, im glad you didn't go further than that, (cutting)I know when you start those other thoughts always enter your mind also... I know this from experince so... Im not just saying that. Writing is a good outlet when you ca... (more »)
A-Soul-Exposed replied...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 9:23 pm
yeah. Though if you have any questions feel free I have nothing to hide in that regard.
talking-with-silence replied...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 2:08 pm
Its good your ok w/ it. Why did you do it?
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