Mess You Up

August 4, 2010
By LivelyGabbi SILVER, Longmont, Colorado
LivelyGabbi SILVER, Longmont, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
the truth is, everyone you meet will hurt you at one point or the other, but you just need to decide who is worth the pain

Come here pretty girl, I've got a way to mess you up.
I'll spin webs of deceit inside your head, till I've got you wishing you were dead.
Until you're screaming at me that you've head enough.
And you're tears are streaming because I'm just sitting here laughing.

I'll suffocate you with your own pain
Fill you with a self hatred and doubt that it will ever go away
You're lost, long gone, and hopeless. All you see is the darkness.
I told you pretty, I had a sure way of messing you up.

Now I've stolen you, there's something missing inside of you.
A lack of interest in all that surrounds you.
There's nothing but the pain that's slowly drowning you.
It's taken a strong hold of you. It's choking you.

Now that I've messed you up pretty girl,
It's time to mess up your whole world.
Grinning mercilessly, I'll bring it crashing down.
Leaving you broken and breathless upon the ground

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on Apr. 14 2012 at 4:51 pm
HaileySanden PLATINUM, Folsom, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing."
-Benjamin Franklin

Wow. This is really intense, emotionally. Great job! You have a way with words.


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