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Everything is unspoken and the World seem's wide open
Everthing might seem as if it's movin in slow motion and that your not gettin nowhere
I think If we open up we can break through
I think if we just beleive we'll make it somehow
Yes we have our bad day's but we all have our good
I've learned time after time that nothin is impossible
My life was a blank page before you walked in
It may seem like no one cares
You know that I'm here and i won't let you go





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mandapanda9736 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 4:46 pm
a good poem, nice flow and a good word choice. I enjoy the meaning of the poem :) just a point, you cannot have a double negative in a sentence, like "not getting nowhere"
 
Damara...C replied...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 4:15 pm
oh okay that should be "like your not getting anywhere" mistyped..... my comuter is screwed up sometimes the voice thing cuts in because i say it while i type....
 
relientkgirlie replied...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 2:18 pm
this might be one of my favorites :))
 
Damara...C replied...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 11:11 am
ahaha thankyou alot !!!!!
 
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