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Am I a rock a rose or a fist?

August 22, 2010
By Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Accept me for who I am, or, watch me as I go"!


How strong do you think I am
How much can you think I can handle
Am I a rock or a rose or a fist?


If I don’t cry doesn’t mean I don’t feel
If I look away doesn’t mean I cant see
Just because I want someone when I’m alone doesn’t mean that I’m helpless,
And that I cant stand on my own

When will you see the point
When will you listen to my name
Am I alone or afraid or a brick?

When will you notice me
When will you seek me as a friend
Am I invisible or unstoppable or a dream?

I know you don’t know what to say
I know your gonna run away
Your despicable and stoppable your not a friend



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on Sep. 21 2010 at 5:22 pm
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Accept me for who I am, or, watch me as I go"!

oh so u mean to make it longer just keepon adding to it? =)

on Sep. 19 2010 at 3:20 pm
mary.brodeur BRONZE, Westerly, Rhode Island
3 articles 34 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Cause sometimes you just need to throw yourself a party."

yeah cause you could probably go pretty far with this one

on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:09 am
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Accept me for who I am, or, watch me as I go"!

what do u mean use this poem and build on new poems that i write?

on Sep. 17 2010 at 2:17 pm
mary.brodeur BRONZE, Westerly, Rhode Island
3 articles 34 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Cause sometimes you just need to throw yourself a party."

wow this is really good...i would use this poem and build on new poems that you write!

Vanessa said...
on Sep. 16 2010 at 5:22 pm
that was awesome i love it very very powerful and a great tone that was pretty epic girl.... ilu

on Sep. 15 2010 at 5:47 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

nice voice ^^ powerful..that was pretty awesome, i liked it a lott!! the message was great!

on Sep. 15 2010 at 5:18 pm
wordjunkie BRONZE, Houston, Texas
1 article 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who say it can't be done should not interrupt those who are doing it.

Its good, maybe add more

on Sep. 15 2010 at 4:46 pm
amandap PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
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i like this, a good meaning to the poem!