Am I a rock a rose or a fist?

August 22, 2010
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How strong do you think I am
How much can you think I can handle
Am I a rock or a rose or a fist?


If I don’t cry doesn’t mean I don’t feel
If I look away doesn’t mean I cant see
Just because I want someone when I’m alone doesn’t mean that I’m helpless,
And that I cant stand on my own

When will you see the point
When will you listen to my name
Am I alone or afraid or a brick?

When will you notice me
When will you seek me as a friend
Am I invisible or unstoppable or a dream?

I know you don’t know what to say
I know your gonna run away
Your despicable and stoppable your not a friend





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tell.me.youll.stay899 said...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 5:47 pm
nice voice ^^ powerful..that was pretty awesome, i liked it a lott!! the message was great!
 
Vanessa replied...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 5:22 pm
that was awesome i love it very very powerful and a great tone that was pretty epic girl.... ilu
 
Ari_lol said...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 5:18 pm
Its good, maybe add more
 
mandapanda9736 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 4:46 pm
i like this, a good meaning to the poem!
 
relientkgirlie replied...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 2:17 pm
wow this is really good...i would use this poem and build on new poems that you write!
 
Damara...C replied...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 11:09 am
what do u mean use this poem and build on new poems that i write?
 
relientkgirlie replied...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 3:20 pm
yeah cause you could probably go pretty far with this one
 
Damara...C replied...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 5:22 pm
oh so u mean to make it longer just keepon adding to it? =)
 
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