walking away

August 20, 2010
By Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!


"Fine"
I yelled, I didn't really care
After all the grief and pain you given me
Don’t expect a care
I will not come crawling back
I know there’s some better for me out their somewhere

I did your wanting
I did you labor
I thought you said you loved me
those word don’t mean a thing
The hugs I got were just some sort of squeeze
The kiss on my cheek
I wiped away with tears

You come back felling sorry
But you’re a little too late
You have lost you luster
You are no longer my mate


The author's comments:
i think this is real, and many have gone through this before. we need to keep moving on.

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on Oct. 7 2010 at 5:27 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

Once again, thank you so much! my dream is to get published, I too am writing a book,more like a novel. I realy like your fiction work.

on Oct. 7 2010 at 5:05 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 475 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

Thanks. :)

on Oct. 7 2010 at 4:32 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

Oh, thanks so much! i will see your work.

on Sep. 27 2010 at 2:58 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 475 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

No, I like the picture. :) And the poem too. :)

on Sep. 27 2010 at 10:14 am
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

thanks for commenting! and ya, lol. sorry about the pic. lol :)

on Sep. 25 2010 at 8:55 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 475 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

By the way, that picture is so dark, yet it has a certain charm to it. It reminds me of something out of a Grimms Brother fairytale for some reason. :)

on Sep. 25 2010 at 8:52 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 475 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

You're right. This poem speaks to me. Sometimes you have to let things go, especially negative people. You just have to move on and go on with your life.


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