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walking away

"Fine"
I yelled, I didn't really care
After all the grief and pain you given me
Don’t expect a care
I will not come crawling back
I know there’s some better for me out their somewhere

I did your wanting
I did you labor
I thought you said you loved me
those word don’t mean a thing
The hugs I got were just some sort of squeeze
The kiss on my cheek
I wiped away with tears

You come back felling sorry
But you’re a little too late
You have lost you luster
You are no longer my mate



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mudpuppy said...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 8:52 pm:
You're right. This poem speaks to me. Sometimes you have to let things go, especially negative people. You just have to move on and go on with your life.
 
mudpuppy replied...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 8:55 pm :
By the way, that picture is so dark, yet it has a certain charm to it. It reminds me of something out of a Grimms Brother fairytale for some reason. :)
 
Zazawish777 replied...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 10:14 am :
thanks for commenting! and ya, lol. sorry about the pic. lol :)
 
mudpuppy replied...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 2:58 pm :
No, I like the picture. :) And the poem too. :)
 
Zazawish777 replied...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 4:32 pm :
Oh, thanks so much! i will see your work.
 
mudpuppy replied...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 5:05 pm :
Thanks. :)
 
Zazawish777 replied...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 5:27 pm :
Once again, thank you so much! my dream is to get published, I too am writing a book,more like a novel. I realy like your fiction work.
 
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