Core of affections

August 20, 2010
I hold you in my heart,
Caressed and treasured.
Tenderly sheltered
From all harm.
I love you forever,
I care for you always.
For you are mine.





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Aderes18 said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 2:03 pm
This poem is so good and sweet. :)
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 3:49 pm
Thank you, it's one of my shorter poetry but non-haiku pieces.
 
IamtheStargirl said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 9:00 pm
BTW, I love the photo, to put things in a generally simple way ;)
 
Aderes18 replied...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 7:30 am
Me too! :0
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 4:04 pm
O, this poem is so tenderly written! In its brevity it holds the simplicity and complexity of affection. It was written in such a way that it was almost like the words weren't even there. I was just witnessing love. I... think that's good.
 
IamtheStargirl replied...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 4:06 pm
Diola lle, I've never thought of it that way, but, like all of my poems, it was very heartfelt. I am glad you see it that way :)
 
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