Confessions of a torturer

I tied her down
And gagged her beautiful voice
Burned her
With my words
I twisted and mangled her
Shaping her to suit my purpose
With no regard for her
I used and abused her
And took her life from her
And all I can say is...
I'm sorry.





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A.Bekah.Girl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 11:18 pm

this is quite good, i think.

i like the imagery.

the beautiful voice bit sticks out to me though. not quite sure why. i just feel like it doesn't quite fit....maybe it's the word beautiful, because there's no other description of her.

 
apocalyptigirl said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 11:03 pm
Wow. This is painful and amazing.
 
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