Confessions of a torturer

August 18, 2010
By Captain-Tightpants GOLD, Lawrenceville, Georgia
Captain-Tightpants GOLD, Lawrenceville, Georgia
18 articles 17 photos 19 comments

I tied her down
And gagged her beautiful voice
Burned her
With my words
I twisted and mangled her
Shaping her to suit my purpose
With no regard for her
I used and abused her
And took her life from her
And all I can say is...
I'm sorry.

The author's comments:
I hurt one of the most important people in my life.

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on Sep. 29 2010 at 11:18 pm
A.Bekah.Girl GOLD, Menlo Park, California
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this is quite good, i think.

i like the imagery.

the beautiful voice bit sticks out to me though. not quite sure why. i just feel like it doesn't quite fit....maybe it's the word beautiful, because there's no other description of her.


on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:03 pm
apocalyptigirl BRONZE, Staunton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"DON'T PANIC." ~from The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams

Wow. This is painful and amazing.


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