Loosing

August 21, 2010
By Anonymous

Loosing
Everything I had molded together
Because you tore it all down
Tore it apart
Nothing makes sense anymore
Days pass too quickly and I forget why
I hung on for so long to begin with
You melt my dreams
You puncture my hopes
I can’t have this anymore
Because I’m loosing
Your side will forever win


The author's comments:
This is basically a set of my emotions written down in my favorite way of poetry. The words flow so well together.

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on Sep. 13 2010 at 4:01 pm
-LeftBehindBroken- GOLD, Providence, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Artists paint on canvas; Musicians paint on silence

thanks i only have a few things published! great constructive critisism haha

on Sep. 13 2010 at 4:00 pm
i like the way this poems flows. its kind of weird tho. maybe think about stanzas... goodjob though pretty cool


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