Loosing

August 21, 2010
By , Providence, SC
Loosing
Everything I had molded together
Because you tore it all down
Tore it apart
Nothing makes sense anymore
Days pass too quickly and I forget why
I hung on for so long to begin with
You melt my dreams
You puncture my hopes
I can’t have this anymore
Because I’m loosing
Your side will forever win





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little-moments* said...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 4:00 pm
i like the way this poems flows. its kind of weird tho. maybe think about stanzas... goodjob though pretty cool
 
CoLdEsTNiGhTs replied...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 4:01 pm
thanks i only have a few things published! great constructive critisism haha
 
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