To get it right

August 20, 2010
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Our lives
Prevent living
Our ways
Prevent new
Stripping ourselves
Of lives
Allows new
Stripping ourselves
Of lives
Leaves nothing
Requires the effort
Of love
Of friendship
Of determination
Stripping ourselves
Of ways
In an attempt
To get it right
This time.

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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 3:04 pm
I like these words, their meaning, and the brief length of each line that they are arranged in. It's very true, it consumes so much of us to try and 'get it right.'
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