To get it right

August 20, 2010
By AlyDay GOLD, North Grafton, Massachusetts
AlyDay GOLD, North Grafton, Massachusetts
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Our lives
Prevent living
Our ways
Prevent new
Stripping ourselves
Of lives
Allows new
Stripping ourselves
Of lives
Leaves nothing
Requires the effort
Of love
Of friendship
Of determination
Stripping ourselves
Of ways
Requires
Craftsmanship
In an attempt
To get it right
This time.



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on Sep. 11 2010 at 3:04 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I like these words, their meaning, and the brief length of each line that they are arranged in. It's very true, it consumes so much of us to try and 'get it right.'




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