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Pressure

Under pressure I'm about to break,
Your life nobody can take,
If they tried,
I'd cry


Cause I'd do anything for you,
Anything to get me through,
Today is the day I figure you out,
Time to break out of the crowd

Time is slowing down,
You're breath showing as you breathe,
Movement showing as you leave,
Coming forth to meet me,
Telling me you love me,
Telling me you care,
Holding me tight,
Getting me through tonight,
Cause I can't sleep with out you beside me,
Cause nightmares come to life,
Waking me to find I'm alone and empty inside


Your love I need,
Making me see you're everything to me,
My life is empty when you're gone,
So empty I have no home,
Hate feeling so alone





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_Elsy_ said...
Sept. 12, 2010 at 12:36 pm
I love it twin :] Sometimes i wish i could write songs like you but when i sing i sound like a dieing cat so that wouldn't work out so well
 
Puff_the_dragon replied...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 6:02 pm
thanks twin i wrote part of this on my cell and then went on here and figured out the rest :)
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 3:20 pm
I very much appreciate the, er, the feeling with which this is written. With both the limitation and wonder of brevity, I will merely say that this is a very good poem. Well done.
 
Puff_the_dragon replied...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 6:03 pm
Thank you very much
 
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