Pressure

August 20, 2010
By Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
36 articles 7 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love can be lost but it will never be forgotten


Under pressure I'm about to break,
Your life nobody can take,
If they tried,
I'd cry


Cause I'd do anything for you,
Anything to get me through,
Today is the day I figure you out,
Time to break out of the crowd

Time is slowing down,
You're breath showing as you breathe,
Movement showing as you leave,
Coming forth to meet me,
Telling me you love me,
Telling me you care,
Holding me tight,
Getting me through tonight,
Cause I can't sleep with out you beside me,
Cause nightmares come to life,
Waking me to find I'm alone and empty inside


Your love I need,
Making me see you're everything to me,
My life is empty when you're gone,
So empty I have no home,
Hate feeling so alone



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on Sep. 17 2010 at 6:03 pm
Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
36 articles 7 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love can be lost but it will never be forgotten

Thank you very much

on Sep. 17 2010 at 6:02 pm
Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
36 articles 7 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love can be lost but it will never be forgotten

thanks twin i wrote part of this on my cell and then went on here and figured out the rest :)

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2010 at 12:36 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

I love it twin :] Sometimes i wish i could write songs like you but when i sing i sound like a dieing cat so that wouldn't work out so well

on Sep. 11 2010 at 3:20 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I very much appreciate the, er, the feeling with which this is written. With both the limitation and wonder of brevity, I will merely say that this is a very good poem. Well done.


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