Caught on You MAG

August 14, 2010
By NuclearMuse GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
NuclearMuse GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
12 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In only two months, Alex became my angel, and in only two months I thought he belonged in heaven, because people like me didn’t deserve to drag him down. But today he is still on earth with me, and now I couldn’t be happier to keep him here." ~ Nikki


I'm unravelling.
Some spots of me are
Worn thin from constant
Use, becoming threadbare.
Loose ends stick out of my
Skin, catching occasionally.
The strings on my heart
Seem to have snagged
On you,
But I don't mind.
This tangled mess in my
Chest has become simply
A leash,
And you are my holder.


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on Jun. 26 2011 at 5:12 pm
alymarie3 PLATINUM, Leavenworth, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Piglet: How do you spell love?
Pooh: You don't spell it, you feel it

wOW!

 

'the strings on my heart jave been snagged on you' is really powerful goodjob!


on Jun. 26 2011 at 9:59 am
TinyPineapple SILVER, New York City, New York
6 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
The past doesn't ever count, what does count is what you are now. ~ “Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.”

5/5

I love your poem, especially the part where you say "...This tangled mess in my chest has become simply a leash, and you are my holder." The poem holds a deep meaning about being controlled by a person and seemingly to just let your heart be as it is.

Your poem rocks!



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