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Frozen

Frozen.
No way to move.
You dont want to.
Nothing could change.
We couldn't be more than we were.
Like an ice cube that can't melt.
Were frozen.

Frozen.
No where to go.
Nothing more than a hug.
When I tried to move
You zapped me with ice.
Like an ice cube that can't melt.
Were frozen.



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bound4life4ever This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 9, 2010 at 10:28 am:
its amaing once again! keep it up yo! my eng teach would love u if u were his student=)
 
olican16 replied...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 6:33 am :
well thanks!!!!! my mom is an english teacherso... you know!!
 
bound4life4ever This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 11:21 am :
lol! THATS SO IRONIC! well..she must b so proud=) keep it up n di wish i was a gr9 writing like u. ill b putting up work after i write this comment so keep checking in 4 my work=)
 
olican16 replied...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 4:53 pm :
will do will do!!! thansk again!
 
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