Daughter and Father

August 18, 2010
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As a girl stood there looking towards the stars she knew that heaven wasn't too far.
Cause of the pain and heartbreak throughout her 5 years, she knows that living on earth will never compare.
Her father knows this very well since he was the one to wish her farewell.
Now she stands there praying to God to keep her father safe from harm.
Since he is a soldier strong and brave, she hopes he'll return with great and exciting things.

This is the suspence many go through as their loved ones are fighting but for who?
Who is peace as we all wish for, so take a moment and remember those who are.

There was a sudden creak coming from inside the house, then she picked up her teddy and ran faster than a mouse.
Through the bush garden and then a step into the house.
Stood a man, tall with bags in hands.
She smiles and jumps into his warm arms, thanking God for bringing the man she loves home safe from harm.

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Passion4art said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 11:06 am
This is a really touching poem! I can really tell it comes to you naturally. I tear almost came to my eye when I first read this. Really great... sorry let me rephrase that: Really AWESOME work. Keep it up!
WritterFighter said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 8:08 am
Awee thx you very much !!!
leslie is amazing said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 8:02 am
awome poem !! im impressed :D good job !
Joseph said...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 8:49 pm
It's astounding, only you can make words come together in such a poetic peice. I am very impresed. :D 
WritterFighter replied...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 9:30 am


Thank you very much for your comment. Its touching really!

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