Daughter and Father

August 18, 2010
By WriterFighter PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Other
WriterFighter PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Other
32 articles 3 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
*Women and men are very different, but not when it comes down to their heart


As a girl stood there looking towards the stars she knew that heaven wasn't too far.
Cause of the pain and heartbreak throughout her 5 years, she knows that living on earth will never compare.
Her father knows this very well since he was the one to wish her farewell.
Now she stands there praying to God to keep her father safe from harm.
Since he is a soldier strong and brave, she hopes he'll return with great and exciting things.

This is the suspence many go through as their loved ones are fighting but for who?
Who is peace as we all wish for, so take a moment and remember those who are.

There was a sudden creak coming from inside the house, then she picked up her teddy and ran faster than a mouse.
Through the bush garden and then a step into the house.
Stood a man, tall with bags in hands.
She smiles and jumps into his warm arms, thanking God for bringing the man she loves home safe from harm.


The author's comments:
My inspiration came from those who have lost their loved ones to war.

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on Oct. 2 2010 at 11:06 am
Passion4art SILVER, Wilsonville, Other
5 articles 11 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagine with your eyes closed then open them to reveal a world of possibilities.

Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever

This is a really touching poem! I can really tell it comes to you naturally. I tear almost came to my eye when I first read this. Really great... sorry let me rephrase that: Really AWESOME work. Keep it up!

on Oct. 1 2010 at 8:08 am
WriterFighter PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Other
32 articles 3 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
*Women and men are very different, but not when it comes down to their heart

Awee thx you very much !!!

on Oct. 1 2010 at 8:02 am
awome poem !! im impressed :D good job !

on Sep. 16 2010 at 9:30 am
WriterFighter PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Other
32 articles 3 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
*Women and men are very different, but not when it comes down to their heart

Hi!

Thank you very much for your comment. Its touching really!


Joseph said...
on Sep. 15 2010 at 8:49 pm
It's astounding, only you can make words come together in such a poetic peice. I am very impresed. :D 


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