Were Through

August 10, 2010
By poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11


"You're the most amazing person I know."
But those words quickly disappeared When you jokingly said
"Were through."
Then everything became serious.
"You were kidding... right?"
I'd say hoping for a certain answer.
But for a while there was no response.
"Are we through like you said?"
"I dont want to put a title on it."
You'd say.
"You kinda have to."
I'd reply.
"Yea. We are I'm really sorry."
You'd say.
"Well, maybe you should be.
I'd say back still weeping.
" I cant wait for the heartbreak at the end of this."
You'd say.
"Good luck with yours. Mine already happened."
I'd reply.
All eyes are on me.
A hand is put on my shoulder.
I'd look up.
The person setting next to me had a compassionate look in his eye.
Then his phone would begin to ring.
He would answer.
"Hello?"
He'd say.
It was him.
He would say
"Is she crying?"
"Yea. She is and its all your fault."
My neighbor would say.
Then he would hang up.
A hug would be given,
And temporally a heart would be mended.


The author's comments:
This is something that i wrote after a terrible break up, this is true.

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on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:22 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

I understand. It was just confusing. too many and you didn't really clarify too well I had to read it a couple times to get it.

on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:16 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

ok... i will and thanks!!!

on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:14 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

i was writing it like it was for him and that i was saying it to him...

on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:14 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

thanks... i think

on Sep. 7 2010 at 12:03 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

I like it but I was a little confused with all the I said You'd reply things. They just confused me a little. Great poem though! :P

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on Sep. 6 2010 at 8:34 pm
syed954 BRONZE, Coral Springs, Florida
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Another great poem!Another one of my poems, To an Innocent One, was just accepted today and it relates to this poem. This poem is flooded with great pathos. Keep up the good work! If you get the chance, comment and rate my other poem. 

on Sep. 6 2010 at 4:11 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

I wrote this when i was at grandmas house!! it seems like most of my poems come to me there!!

 

Thansk for all of your feedback!!


on Sep. 6 2010 at 3:04 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

This is really relatable and flows really well. This is a hard thing to go through and you put that into words in a really well-written, powerful, emotional way. Great job, Keep writing~ <3


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