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August 1, 2010
By ariel. BRONZE, Geneseo, New York
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ariel. BRONZE, Geneseo, New York
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life's a box pf chcocolates.....eat it.

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I dream of them in my undecided






mind.
To be so kind, yet have a statementlinger in

your

conscience. A sentence in which would make ones' senses tingle, would break ones' thinking. A few







words

of wisdom in a crazy world where thoughts are precious.





Carefully,

we step into a dangerous territory with just these few words,





"I love you"

© Christine S., Arlington, VA

The author's comments:
i was inspired by all the feelings of love around me. i saw how some people accepted love from one other person while others were afraid to face it. Afraid to return the feeling of love to the other person. i hope people would read this and think about the meaning of it. I would hope people would understand how the simple sentence of "i love you" could be so strong in so many ways. how saying "i love you" could make or break a good relationship.
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