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Perhaps

August 9, 2010
By IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven


Anyone can write poetry,
and anyone can read it.
But only a few people
can connect with each other
on a much deeper sense
through said writing
or reading.
An excitement trills through the poet
as he scrawls the first sentence.
A shiver jerks through the
reader
as he reads
a
single
last
word
A truth is revealed.


The author's comments:
Just an idea.

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on Aug. 22 2011 at 4:28 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Wow, cool, le hannon for your praise. 

on Aug. 16 2011 at 11:04 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

This spoke to me. You put into words an abstract concept I've been trying to figure out for a while! Wonderful! I loved this! The flow was great and so was the description!

on Jul. 14 2011 at 3:46 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Thank you Yellowrose79, I'm very glad you like it :)

on Jul. 14 2011 at 3:44 pm
mistaken_laughter PLATINUM, Alvin, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are three rules to writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are." W. Somerset Maugham

Wonderful, I love how the words flow so well together.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 11:11 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Nope. I'll put that on my to-read list. :) 

on Jun. 14 2011 at 11:12 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

They are so well done :) Have you read the books?

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 7:44 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I LOVE THE LORD OF THE RINGS MOVIES!!! THEY ARE SOME OF MY FAVES! 

Oh cool, I'll check out that website some time and get all my friends confused with elvish language. :)  

(because I have only one friend who would know elvish language)


on Jun. 13 2011 at 6:02 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Rim Hanaid means 'many thanks', I'm a huge fan of Lord of the Rings, but I'm afraid I didn't pick the language directly up from the books, I got it from a we.b s.ite called Arwen - Unomiel d.ot c.om.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 3:04 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

What does Rim Hanaid mean?Sorry, but I am not familiar with elvish language! Where did you pick it up from,Lord of the Rings or some place else? 

on Jun. 9 2011 at 2:10 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Rim hanaid, Aderes, for this and many other comments :) Your words are encouraging.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 2:07 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

This is so very true!

LOVE IT!


on Sep. 20 2010 at 3:50 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Thanks for the praise, I really appreciate your comments :)

Boosfalsh is quite interesting, and I always make a point of it to check out  my commentor's work.

You're so funny :)

And, seriously, I would really love to check out your work, as a matter of fact, I'm heading to your profile right now :)

Thanks again for your wonderful comments :) <3


on Sep. 19 2010 at 4:16 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I mean: your work is great work. Not mine. I'm not that egotistical.

Wow, I'm socially awkward.


on Sep. 19 2010 at 4:15 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Ah, Boosflash is certainly a charming individual. I wonder tentatively... could you read some of my poetry? There would be nothing that would delight me more. Great work.

on Sep. 19 2010 at 4:13 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Great poem, and yes, it's all very true. An idea is all you need. Besides that thing we call music, there is no form of contact between people that I adore more than true poetry. Wonderfully said, my friend.

on Sep. 13 2010 at 5:06 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I'll take that. welcome you're.

on Sep. 13 2010 at 4:45 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Thanks :)

Not sure what you mean by "captianize me captian", but I could knight you ;)


on Sep. 11 2010 at 7:00 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

this is very nice darling. captainize me captain.


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