No One's There

August 8, 2010
I’m feeling sort of lonely, I say,
But no one’s there to hear me.

I need someone to help me, I plead,
But no one’s there to catch me.

I want someone to love me, I wish,
But no one’s there to be with me.

I could use someone to comfort me, I cry,
But no one’s there but me.

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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 8:40 pm
you sound all alone. very nice. i do love the usage of the last line. do your dance captain.
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