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How can I be fly without the wind beneath my wings?This one kept me high up in the sky but now I am slowly falling and I don't like the feeling..I wish I was back up in the sky where the colors blue and white are seen but at the moment all I see is black.... ironically this color brings comfort to my atmosphere...and that one should be in fear of the vulcher in me.





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SnickerLover said...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 5:37 pm
Two thumbs up!
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 3, 2010 at 7:14 pm
You write very well. I love the format and message. Ah, flight is never as easy as it seems in our dreams, is it?
 
condor said...
Sept. 3, 2010 at 11:42 am
aawwwwwwwwweeeessssssoooommmeee !!!
 
skysurferfan said...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 9:12 pm
Wow.  You have an incredible way with words.  I feel the same way sometimes.  Keep on writing poetry!
 
Coryssa said...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 7:11 pm
Your poem was really good and had great description. Your really good at writing poems.
 
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