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The One

August 24, 2010
By PennyR SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
PennyR SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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How can I be fly without the wind beneath my wings?This one kept me high up in the sky but now I am slowly falling and I don't like the feeling..I wish I was back up in the sky where the colors blue and white are seen but at the moment all I see is black.... ironically this color brings comfort to my atmosphere...and that one should be in fear of the vulcher in me.



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on Sep. 4 2010 at 5:37 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY, STING LIKE A BEE- MUHAMMID ALI

Two thumbs up!

on Sep. 3 2010 at 7:14 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

You write very well. I love the format and message. Ah, flight is never as easy as it seems in our dreams, is it?

on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:42 am
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

aawwwwwwwwweeeessssssoooommmeee !!!

on Sep. 1 2010 at 9:12 pm
Roseyalia SILVER, Don&#39t Need To Know, California
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Favorite Quote:
Take my love, take my land, take me where I cannot stand. I don't care, I'm still free, you can't take the sky from me. Take me out to the black. Tell 'em I ain't coming back. Burn the land and boil the sea, but you can't take the sky from me.

Wow.  You have an incredible way with words.  I feel the same way sometimes.  Keep on writing poetry!

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on Sep. 1 2010 at 7:11 pm
Coryssa GOLD, Midlothian, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
I believe in the sun even if it isn't shining. I believe in love even when I'm alone. I believe in God even when he is silent.

Your poem was really good and had great description. Your really good at writing poems.