i still...

August 4, 2010
By natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.


There’s not a day that goes by that
I don’t wish your suicide was a lie..
There’s not a day that goes by I don’t
remember all those slow songs, me
with my arms around your neck and
you holding me close and tight.
There’s not a day that goes by I don’t
miss that, a feeling of not wanting to
ever let go...there’s never a moment
I don’t ask why you had to die..
There’s not a day that I don’t
think of how wrong everything went,
why couldn’t it all just stay right??

There’s not a day that goes by I
don’t miss your smile and laugh.
Or the way you always got me to
laugh! =)
not a day goes by that I don’t
wonder who you’d be today...
Not a day goes by that I don’t
understand why you couldnt just stay...

I still remember every little kiss.
I still remember every little thing.
I still remember how when I was with you
everything felt just like perfect bliss..
I still remember all the smiles and laughs
you used to bring.
I still remember that first day.
I still remember everything you used to say.
I still wish...
For everything I still miss...


The author's comments:
its pretty much self explanatory =)

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on Sep. 16 2010 at 7:57 pm
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.

thanks guys it really means a lot that you read and liked this poem...i really appreciate it and im sorry it made you cry =( i know that its a good thing but it for some reason makes me feel bad 

on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:50 pm
jesus.musik.freak BRONZE, Port St Lucie, Florida
3 articles 4 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your going through hell, keep on going, don't slow down. If your scared don't show it. You might get out before the devil even knows your there. - Rodney Atkins, If your going through hell

I honestly dont know. Its really good. It made me cry a little. It is written beautifully

on Aug. 28 2010 at 5:29 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

A beautiful poem, and a wonderful narrative of love and loss and joy and sorrow and old memories and fresh pain. I applaud you for writing this piece.




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