No More Playing

August 4, 2010
By AmandaVi GOLD, Drayton Valley, Other
AmandaVi GOLD, Drayton Valley, Other
17 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every song ends, but thats no reason not to enjoy the music?"

There was a girl,
There was a boy,

They both had a heart,
But both were a decoy,

They thought they had feelings,
But that didn't include joy,

No friendship no trust,
They were just bound to destroy,

They wanted to believe,
To believe that they could enjoy,

This fake belief they had,
Really they just like to annoy,

Annoy each other day after day,
Then the boy started to employ,

Employ new girls in his arms,
He took her heart as a toy,

She saw him again and said to him,
"No more playing for you boy."

The author's comments:
Boy Girl story.

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on Aug. 29 2010 at 6:58 pm
meganwagner21 PLATINUM, Old Bridge, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes good things have to fall apart so better things can fall together." -Marilyn Monroe
"Nobody can go back and make a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending." -Maria Robinson

interesting concept, but the rhymes r a bit off with the syllables and words

on Aug. 29 2010 at 5:24 pm
Moorbeauty SILVER, Miami, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
" I am a female, I can do beyond my limits"

its kinda cute but needs work !

on Aug. 28 2010 at 1:44 am
Virabbit SILVER, Bellingham, Washington
5 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Kiss me and you will see how important I am.

The rhymes seemed a bit forced to me..

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