my date with bud

August 4, 2010
By push4ice SILVER, Schaumburg, Illinois
push4ice SILVER, Schaumburg, Illinois
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dont forget the heat
anticipation
the little green leaves smiling
the warmth of that summer day
dont forget how nervous you were
as you lifted it to your mouth
the burning sensation
the feeling of weightlessness
dont forget the regret
the feeling of patheticness
the feeling that of self hate
dont remember what you were trying to forget
on that fateful summer day
with weed



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on Sep. 1 2010 at 9:19 pm
push4ice SILVER, Schaumburg, Illinois
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yes, i hate to admit it was from experience, what can i say? s*** happens, thanks for the comment :)

on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:23 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Very meaningful piece. The situation was described with poetic perfection. It seems like you were really there (were you?). So well done! I applaud you!

on Aug. 28 2010 at 8:41 pm
Moorbeauty SILVER, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
" I am a female, I can do beyond my limits"

its cute ! i like it

on Aug. 28 2010 at 7:35 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

nice poem ;]


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