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dont forget the heat
anticipation
the little green leaves smiling
the warmth of that summer day
dont forget how nervous you were
as you lifted it to your mouth
the burning sensation
the feeling of weightlessness
dont forget the regret
the feeling of patheticness
the feeling that of self hate
dont remember what you were trying to forget
on that fateful summer day
with weed



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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 2:23 pm
Very meaningful piece. The situation was described with poetic perfection. It seems like you were really there (were you?). So well done! I applaud you!
 
push4ice replied...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 9:19 pm
yes, i hate to admit it was from experience, what can i say? s*** happens, thanks for the comment :)
 
BaddChick13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 8:41 pm
its cute ! i like it
 
condor said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 7:35 pm
nice poem ;]
 
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