A Missing Part of Me

August 2, 2010
By fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk.
-Stephen King :P
The trust of the innocent is the liar's most useful tool.
-Stephen King
Now that we're here,
It's so far away
All the struggle we thought was in vain
All the mistakes,
One life contained
They all finally start to go away
Now that we're here its so far away
And I feel like I can face the day
I can forgive and I’m not ashamed to be the person that I am today


Hanging on by a breaking thread,
Feeling hollow inside;feeling dead,
Something is missing; a part of me,
Something is missing; but what can it be?,

There's no light; only black,
As days slip by I begin to loose track,
Hours turn to days; days to weeks,
And still something's missing; my life is so bleak,

Then one day, out of the blue,
A blinidng light comes shining through,
The light dims down and now I can see,
Now I know what this light must be,

There he stood with smoldering eyes,
Full of mystery but not any lies,
His eyes are honest and full of grief,
And I stand there starring in disbelief,

He glances my way and stops dead in his tracks,
He stares at me so I stare right back,
And for a moment,we're all alone,
standing still like we're made of stone,

Lost in each others mesmerizing eyes,
I can't tear my gaze away no matter how hard I try,
Then he walks toward me and takes my hand,
Everything becomes clear; now I understand,

What was missing inside of me all along,
It's like finding the lyrics to a missing song,
We are like 2 birds; 2 love filled doves,
We are made for one another; this feeling, is love.


The author's comments:
this is a poem i wrote about what u imagine love must feel like

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on Jan. 12 2011 at 4:49 pm
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk.
-Stephen King :P
The trust of the innocent is the liar's most useful tool.
-Stephen King
Now that we're here,
It's so far away
All the struggle we thought was in vain
All the mistakes,
One life contained
They all finally start to go away
Now that we're here its so far away
And I feel like I can face the day
I can forgive and I’m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

11111?  typo lolz :P

on Jan. 12 2011 at 3:37 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

awesome11111

 


on Jan. 11 2011 at 6:57 pm
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk.
-Stephen King :P
The trust of the innocent is the liar's most useful tool.
-Stephen King
Now that we're here,
It's so far away
All the struggle we thought was in vain
All the mistakes,
One life contained
They all finally start to go away
Now that we're here its so far away
And I feel like I can face the day
I can forgive and I’m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

thnx alot that means alot to me, ive wrote alot of new poems and i even wrote a song so b on the look out for em

on Nov. 5 2010 at 4:50 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

i love that omg i love that...... and as soon as i felt like that they just urn into something else.......KEEP WRITING




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