Summer Lovin'

July 29, 2010
By Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee


Time spent together
Under the hot summer sun;
Shared looks meaning only -
I hope you're the one.

Everything was perfect -
Me flirting with you
(You didn't always flirt first)
Happy texts outta the blue.

Eventually we each
Finally gathered the nerve
To kiss each other one night
Near my truck by the curb.

I look back on that night
With a smile then a frown -
Because while I'm Remembering Sunday,
You aren't really around.

I make up excuses
Try to avoid the fact
That maybe, just possibly,
This perfection is cracked.

He loves me, He loves me not,
Ups and Downs,
Back and Forth,
Blissful smiles, frustrated frowns.

I'm about to give up,
This round-n-round makes me dizzy
Then you give me a look
That sends my heart into a frenzy.

I waste a precious second,
Your hungry lips on mine,
Wondering if this roller coaster called love
Is worth the time and trouble to ride.

After a brief internal debate,
I decide I'm willing to see
Where this roller coaster goes
And find that your lips- agree. <3


The author's comments:
This one is about the ups and downs of a summer fling really. Wanting it to be more, and hoping wholeheartedly that it will be. (Couldn't find a picture of a roller coaster :( Sad Day!)

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on Oct. 24 2010 at 12:51 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Yeah I think I know and you know how you said itd be crazy if we were talking about the same guy?....i think i'm sure who you're talking about and if i'm right then we are talking about the same guy ... !!!

on Oct. 24 2010 at 12:38 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Yes!!! How'd you know? :P I bet if you think about it you'll figure it out. However I STILL wanna know who yours is about :)

on Oct. 24 2010 at 12:34 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
-Alex (aka GangstaEyes)
Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.
-Winston Smith '1984'
Don't go wishin' your life away...
-Daddy S2
"What a drag it was to be limited by reality."

Wow I like this...curious to know who this boy is... Remembering Sunday is a good song did he tell you to listen to it???

on Sep. 10 2010 at 5:07 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

his is sooo great!! great job i love it deffinatly one of my favs of your's

on Sep. 2 2010 at 3:19 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Thanks and I hope so! :)

on Sep. 1 2010 at 10:18 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

awwww, this has so much depth to it.

keep writing. your work is relevant to so many teenage situations. your work will reach a lot of readers.


on Aug. 30 2010 at 3:02 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

wow... boy crazy much?? Only joking... I love your work!!!! You are the most gangsterest poet ever!!! :)


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