Darkness

July 30, 2010
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Darkness is black.
It hids so many things.

Darkness is like a blanket
That lays across the land every night
And that takes away,
But doesn't give,
Heat.

Darkness is like a large shadow
That blocks the light
And makes sure that wonders
Stay hidden
For awhile.

Darkness could also be death,
But that I cannot know.
Darkness could allow the plants,
In secret,
To grow and sprout.
Who knows?
Maybe darkness even hides magic.





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ZaiQuiDanHeu said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 3:47 pm
Thank you for your wonderful comments. I'll try to have another poem up as soon as possible.
 
xXDeadxSoulXx said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 11:19 am

This was very well written and I really like how you didnt make darkness just seem like a cruel cold world...You made it seem like it had wonder and mystery and I respect that....Keep it up your very good....

 

 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 8:11 pm
Very well written poem. You described very well one way of looking at darkness, with a quality I have failed to create when writing on the same subject. Darkness is so complicated, for it is the unknown.
 
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