eternal love

July 21, 2010
By Anonymous

Can love ever be eternal?
Does it fade away with time?
The end always seems so painful.
The feelings escape through tears and a rhyme.

Does anyone stay together anymore?
Can anyone stay the same?
I’ve seen too many people walk out the door.
We all are so sad we just alter the blame.

Can humans be incapable of love?
Does love not exist?
We don’t feel without another’s shove.
We kill these feelings heartlessly like an exorcist.

Does love always fall apart?
Can people work through the hurt?
I don’t believe anymore that it ever starts.
Everyone just gets treated like dirt.

Can marriage live and go to heaven?
Does ‘I Love You’ ever really count?
It’s more of just a rare unlucky seven.
We use this word just to astound.

Can love ever be eternal?
Does it fade away with time?
The end always seems so painful.
The feelings escape through tears and this rhyme.


The author's comments:
I wrote this one night when my parents were fighting about whether they should stay together.

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on Aug. 27 2010 at 9:34 pm
dream..catcher.. BRONZE, Dream Landing, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Never frown because you never know who is falling in love with your smile.."

"The best things in life are unseen, that's why we close our eyes when we kiss, cry, and dream.."

"Normal is only a mode on a washing machine.."

grand question,,i will tell you if it ever ends up worken for me,,tehe,, seems to always end up being brocken &crushed for me. but i try to still hope..try to anyways..

on Aug. 26 2010 at 6:57 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

it seems like in today's society, this is the question that should be asked the most... good stuff, read some of mine?


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