Invisable me

July 19, 2010
By JordanDeBerry BRONZE, Chapin, South Carolina
JordanDeBerry BRONZE, Chapin, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If life gives u lemons, keep them i mean hey free lemons

The petals fall upon the ground
One by one, they make no sound
Soft as down, and white as snow
In the dark they seem to glow
Daylight comes and still they fall
But still my rose stands straight and tall
It does not wilt or wither down
Accepting fate without a frown
Day by day it's color fades
No longer white but dim and grey
The petals lose their texture;soft
And crumble from the slightest touch
The day has come, all petals shed
And stands alone a lonely stem
It's brilliance may no longer glow
Embrace the death of My White Rose

The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this peom one day while i was on the phone with my friend i was so bored and well here it is

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on Apr. 22 2012 at 7:01 pm
Evagline.Brisa.Wilder GOLD, Collegeville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
-Albert Einstein

The words in that order is very poetic. I loved the description and in a way it gave it a texture, kind of like food, in this case it was a good thing


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