Mouth That Sings

July 19, 2010
Love so sweet
Love so kind
Feel it pulsing all the time
Heart of Gold
Angelic wings
With a mouth that sings of Love

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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 11:48 am

sometimes it's hard to write a short poem. because when a reader reads a poem as short as this, he/she tends to dwell on every single word. therefore, the writer needs to make every word meaningful. well i think you did a wonderful job at that, and it is a very difficult thing to master. you definitely made every word a prize!!

you can rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!(:

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