I opened my eyes today

July 19, 2010
I opened my eyes today
Realizing the feeling that you once
Gave me was fake

I searched my mind today
For all good memories
But it dawned on me
They all disappeared

I closed my eyes today
Trying to shut out the feeling
You gave me
But I failed yet again

I finally realized today
Your sayings come back to haunt me
And your words now put me on
My deathbed

But sweetheart today I realized
That yesterday was the day
That a year ago you asked me to marry you
And now today is the day you said
Goodbye





Join the Discussion

This article has 1 comment. Post your own now!

thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 3:36 pm

this is a great poem to express your feelings in. i can really feel the raw emotion through your words. i was hooked from the first word to the very last. wonderful!

you can rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!(:

 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback