Ghost in my window

August 18, 2010
By JustChristy94 SILVER, Lewisville, North Carolina
JustChristy94 SILVER, Lewisville, North Carolina
6 articles 6 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Regret Anything Because At One Time It Was Exactly What You Wanted."


There’s a ghost in my window
He keeps calling my name
I cant turn him away
But I’m tired of this childish game
I wish I could let him in
Just let him hold me tight
But I know it will end me
And I won’t say good night
His hold on me is strong
I don’t quite understand
Why I keep letting him stay
And can’t seem to take a stand


The author's comments:
Pretty much started this about 1 1/2 ago. It's inspired by my recent and not so recent past i guess.

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on Aug. 26 2010 at 10:39 pm
JustChristy94 SILVER, Lewisville, North Carolina
6 articles 6 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Regret Anything Because At One Time It Was Exactly What You Wanted."

thank you =) and yeah the end it suppose to be contradictory in a way

on Aug. 24 2010 at 2:57 pm
chrisbriones GOLD, Anaheim, California
11 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe nothing can be justly and completely explained by words."

It's ambivalence. There's much emotion which the author intended. Genius i admit.

on Aug. 24 2010 at 2:55 pm
chrisbriones GOLD, Anaheim, California
11 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe nothing can be justly and completely explained by words."

Is this guilt i detect? Whom have you wronged, if it be so.

Keep writing.


friend-less said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 10:47 pm
friend-less, Natick, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only way to deal with an unfree world is to become so absolutely free that your very existence is an act of rebellion.

This poem is really good. I like the creepiness of it. The idea that the ghost is right outside the window gives me chills. Why does the narrator want to hug the ghost though? Is she facing her past?

on Aug. 23 2010 at 9:01 pm
CynthiaLynnILY PLATINUM, Moore, Oklahoma
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It is amazing. I'm am putting it on my favorites.

on Aug. 23 2010 at 5:40 pm
rawrpiranha SILVER, Godfrey, Illinois
8 articles 2 photos 9 comments
i really really like the beginning alot, and the idea behind it, but i feel like the ending is contradictory to the rest of the poem. just my opinion, though!


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