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Ghost in my window

There’s a ghost in my window
He keeps calling my name
I cant turn him away
But I’m tired of this childish game
I wish I could let him in
Just let him hold me tight
But I know it will end me
And I won’t say good night
His hold on me is strong
I don’t quite understand
Why I keep letting him stay
And can’t seem to take a stand



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chrisbriones said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 2:55 pm:

Is this guilt i detect? Whom have you wronged, if it be so.

Keep writing.

 
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windryder said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 10:47 pm:
This poem is really good. I like the creepiness of it. The idea that the ghost is right outside the window gives me chills. Why does the narrator want to hug the ghost though? Is she facing her past?
 
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LoveCynthiaBieber said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 9:01 pm:
It is amazing. I'm am putting it on my favorites.
 
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rawrpiranha said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 5:40 pm:
i really really like the beginning alot, and the idea behind it, but i feel like the ending is contradictory to the rest of the poem. just my opinion, though!
 
chrisbriones replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 2:57 pm :
It's ambivalence. There's much emotion which the author intended. Genius i admit.
 
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Aug. 26, 2010 at 10:39 pm :
thank you =) and yeah the end it suppose to be contradictory in a way
 
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