July 27, 2010
I lost you.
You left.
You got sick.
I've known you for 13 years.
But thats not long enough.
You moved.Across the world.
I missed you.
I cryed when I heard the news.
You've gone to a better place.
And I hope to see you someday.

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Olajide said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 10:16 pm

So heartbroken. My only concern is the typo erro/spelling error...but that is really not a big deal. I love to read this kind of poem, though simple, but the emotion inside is complex. I got no better way of saying it. May you meet a better comforter. I give you 5 star for a good job well done.


Check my poem "death reject" please if you will.

Ally25 replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 1:11 pm
Thanks so much! :)
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