The book

July 30, 2010
By ChillieMae GOLD, Winston-Salem, North Carolina
ChillieMae GOLD, Winston-Salem, North Carolina
15 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Peace begins with a smile


The Book
My face
You adore
Unveil
Judge me
Understand
The Secret
Rather
Hate the cover
Love the book
Rather
Hate the display
Love the taste
Adore me
But not what you see



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on Aug. 22 2010 at 7:51 pm
JakeShaw PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
When you're in a night that seems almost devoid of stars and you look but can't find someone to help you see. Look for that lonely star and let it guide you until you find the light. (anonymous)

Very good imagery. You really portray you point and feeling well! Check out some of my work you may like it!

on Aug. 22 2010 at 6:16 pm
-LeftBehindBroken- GOLD, Providence, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Artists paint on canvas; Musicians paint on silence

I really like the way you used the tool of spacing It helps keep your BRILLIANT thoughts seperate! keep writinG! if your first is this greAT i cant wait for more!! KEEP WRITING!

-KaTiE


on Aug. 22 2010 at 5:22 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

WOW i love the message in this piece!! this is definitely one of my favorites. when i first started reading it i wasn't quite sure what you meant by it, but then i realized that you took the saying "don't judge a book by it's cover" and made it into something truly brilliant!!

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. wonderful job on this. keep writing(:


on Aug. 20 2010 at 4:54 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

ya, i agree with both ur comments !

i do like it a lot.

5 stars!

will u comment and rate my work please!


on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:21 pm
ChillieMae GOLD, Winston-Salem, North Carolina
15 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Peace begins with a smile

Thank you so much! It's one of my first poems and it really describes how i feel about outer appearances. it means a lot to hear someone understands

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on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:15 pm
Photo_97, Ct., Connecticut
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WOW i really love that and you got what your saying across with skill and grace good job!




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