The book

July 30, 2010
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The Book
My face
You adore
Judge me
The Secret
Hate the cover
Love the book
Hate the display
Love the taste
Adore me
But not what you see

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JakeShaw said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 7:51 pm
Very good imagery. You really portray you point and feeling well! Check out some of my work you may like it!
CoLdEsT_NiGhTs said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 6:16 pm

I really like the way you used the tool of spacing It helps keep your BRILLIANT thoughts seperate! keep writinG! if your first is this greAT i cant wait for more!! KEEP WRITING!


thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 5:22 pm

WOW i love the message in this piece!! this is definitely one of my favorites. when i first started reading it i wasn't quite sure what you meant by it, but then i realized that you took the saying "don't judge a book by it's cover" and made it into something truly brilliant!!

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. wonderful job on this. keep writing(:

Emma.C.B said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 3:15 pm
WOW i really love that and you got what your saying across with skill and grace good job!
ChillieMae replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 3:21 pm
Thank you so much! It's one of my first poems and it really describes how i feel about outer appearances. it means a lot to hear someone understands
Zazawish777 replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 4:54 pm

ya, i agree with both ur comments !

i do like it a lot.

5 stars!

will u comment and rate my work please!

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