Romeo and Juliet

June 28, 2010
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It was never meant to be,
But we can't look away.
There's nothing else to see,
How was I supposed to know
It would end one day?

Fear and hope had held our hearts,
But we kept our secret, kept it well,
That we were struck by Cupid's darts,
And we'd hid our heaven among hell.

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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 4:29 pm

i like how you took a title that almost everyone knows and turned it into something original. your rhyming flows very well, almost as if a professional wrote it!

you can rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!(:

EmMae replied...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 10:03 pm
Thank you! :D
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