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Gone is the Angel

July 29, 2010
By forgottenangel SILVER, Dearborn, Michigan
forgottenangel SILVER, Dearborn, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Silence is Golden"


Set her free if you must
Let her go if you may
Stop holding her so tight
It just doesn't seem right
She grieving on the inside
But the pain is still trickling through
So loud is the music
Yet her screams can be heard
Those echoing shrieks
Shes holding the trigger so tight
The moment she pulls it shes free
A fast painful death
Yet the smile never fades away
As she watches her blood drain
As she waits for the light
To come and take her out of sight



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on Dec. 21 2010 at 1:59 pm
forgottenangel SILVER, Dearborn, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Silence is Golden"

Thank you!

on Nov. 28 2010 at 11:30 am
forget_me_not SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
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oh wow, amazing

on Aug. 25 2010 at 12:25 pm
forgottenangel SILVER, Dearborn, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Silence is Golden"

Thank you :)

on Aug. 23 2010 at 9:17 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

VVVVV agreed! dont ever stop writing!i like how you wrote this from the third person point of view. it gives the reader a sort of perspective like looking from the outside, which is exactly the mood you were trying to create it seems.

check out some of my work if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!(:


on Aug. 23 2010 at 6:34 pm
forgottenangel SILVER, Dearborn, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Silence is Golden"

Thank you :)

on Aug. 23 2010 at 2:21 am
amy404555555555 BRONZE, Wausau, Wisconsin
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i love this poem, it really expresses you're true feeling's, dont stop writing ever