the last conversation

June 26, 2010
By TrackStar SILVER, Diberville, Mississippi
TrackStar SILVER, Diberville, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
you will never know what falling is until you have yo get up

Can you see that i am now thriving?

i walked away and i can say im suriviving.

i prayed about my painful past,

and i slowed the race so my life will last.

can you see that i am now triumphant in what i've done?

without all of the uneeded sorrows i feel i finaly won.

i put away what was killing me

Cant you see ive given in finaly

so good bye to you, i wont see you soon

my horrible old love has gone down with the moon.

and may i find this time a new love

one now given for up above.

this is our last, no more of me may you take.

because loving you was my first real mistake.

i'll give all that i've taken for you,

good-bye love, i wont miss you.

The author's comments:
this is about giving up an old relationship that you just couldnt let go of, the steps that arent there yet you want to take them. love that is true that you say goodbye to but, you mean with every part of your own being.

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