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Scarred

Scarred on the inside not on the out.

Scarred on my mind without a doubt.

Scarred where no one can see, in the head.

Scarred in another world. A world for the dead.

Scarred, all over, not like the tamed.

Scarred... Should I be ashamed?





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scenesoccerqueen said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 4:21 pm
aboslutety beuatiful poem! never be ashamed of the scars it show that youre real. that youve lived and that youre alive! love this...
 
Lauren_Faith996 said...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 3:15 pm
Truly amazing.
 
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Jan. 7, 2012 at 10:26 am
Wow, nice job. I liked the refrain of 'scarred,' and also how you ended the poem with the question (and no, I don't think you should be ashamed :3 ). The only things I would change is in the last line, I think more syllables should be added to make it flow better and then in the first line after 'inside,' a comma needs to be added. Overall, very nice poem! :)
 
Kev-Girl said...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 7:54 pm
I just love the way you write! I love how it rhymes, although some times it feels forced, but it's still very good!
 
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