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Her darkness and her misery cloud
An angel's vision --
She's all alone
Or so she thinks
Or so she thinks

She prays to a God
She doesn't believe exists
She's dying to live
And living to die
She's trapped in a
Nightmare that reaches
With fingers like shadows
Toward her peace

Dark angel with crimson satin
Wings spread
Soars among her kingdom of
Memories
Any move to resurrect her happiness
Might result in more pain

But me -- Imm here now, trying to
Be a shooting star in a land
Of all that's dark
I may be faling,
I may be winning
I guess I'll just have to
Wait and see.



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Panda500 said...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 9:42 am
truly touching i wrote a story called nightmare of depression i think u  will love it please post a comment on it btw how did you come up with the name sabina22 mostly sabina cuz i knew a person named sabina and havent heerd the name again until now and r u swedish cuz the person i knew was swedish 
 
sabina22 replied...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 5:46 pm
Awesome! I will be sure to check it out, thanks for the suggestion! =) Oh, well, Sabina Rose was always my pen name, and 22 was one of my favorite numbers, so I just put it together =) Nah, I'm not Swedish, but I do really like the name, I think it has a really cool ring to it!
 
grandmarquis said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 7:41 am
This is some great work.....makes me stop and think about things.  Keep up the great writing.  GM
 
sabina22 replied...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 5:06 pm
thank you! <33 :D
 
jackieb said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 10:20 am
Really good!   Keep up the good work!!
 
sabina22 replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 10:44 am
thank you! (:
 
sasha 99 said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 10:19 am
I love it - keep on writing
 
sabina22 replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 10:44 am
thanx! <3
 
tina.love.books13 said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 10:08 am
I really like it keep the good work!!
 
sabina22 replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 10:45 am
many thanks! :D
 
tina.love.books13 replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 9:01 am
u welcome! I hope you keep writing!!! :)
 
sabina22 replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 9:19 am
thank you very much =)
 
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