baby girl, hidden Inside

July 15, 2010
By amy404555555555 BRONZE, Wausau, Wisconsin
amy404555555555 BRONZE, Wausau, Wisconsin
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That’s what they called her.
Sugar,sweetstuff, baby girl.
If you knew her you’d know she was far from sweet.
Everyone called her baby.
You might ask?
Becasuse that’s what she was.
She may have looked grown and responsible,
But she was far from it.
She was wild, untamed.
But then she became cold as stone.
Many tried to catch her at the time,

some still tried to catch her even after hearing about her past,

but only to learn,
that trying to catch her was like trying to catch the wild,
cold and reckless.
Her heart was warm and inviting once,
Long,long ago.
But now heart is ice,
She looks happy but her eyes are frozen,
Wating for the one,
The only one that can melt the ice.
Her dangerous sun.
Only he, could save her,
If only he could save himself first.
You see he loved her more than anything,
but the unforgivble, jelous, drug.
And it was the drug that disided their fate,
The unfogiving drug.
Now they call her stupid,
The girl who lisined to a druggy,
And died a druggy.
What of her sun you might ask?
What happened to him?
He lived, didn’t even know she was dieing
Untell she was no more.
Her only love, her dangerous sun became her death.
I loved you dearly,
I loved you more,
But it was never enouf for you,
I was stupid to love you,
But yet,
I still love you and always will.

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on Aug. 23 2010 at 1:58 am
amy404555555555 BRONZE, Wausau, Wisconsin
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thank you for everything u do for me, it really helps, love ya

on Aug. 23 2010 at 1:51 am
inspired_542 SILVER, Wausau, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
All nature is but art unknown to thee
-alexander pope

amanda i love all your work you should post more:) <3 ur the best sis ever! :) -alicia


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