When god wrote love upon her arms

July 15, 2010
By neknek2010 BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
neknek2010 BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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Each picture she draws turns blood, rain, and waterfalls into everlasting pain, waking up every daylight morning hoping she wont feel the same. Her walls are closing in again collapsing on a lung, the fallback and feedback of deep epression has all begun. Side by side and night by night she lays down by her lover. knowing her pain kills everything she keeps it undercover. But one more night upon her feet will simply make her weak. And arm affliction pain addiction yet he keeps her from committing such harm. Now im there with my cross to bear: As GOD wrote love upon her arms

The author's comments:
A music video inspired this poem. i wrote it in reguards to the song and esp. the video for Crawling by Linkin Park

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Neknek2010 said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:19 pm
Thanks yea it did.. I really connected to the song n the girl in the video so I wrote this poem as sort of a background story of the girl from the video. I felt that my poem could be her story :)

on Aug. 2 2011 at 8:03 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.

-emanuel litvinoff

dude this came from that??? thats amazing!!!


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