Loving Him

July 15, 2010
By Laveina-Annelle BRONZE, Flint, Michigan
Laveina-Annelle BRONZE, Flint, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Who are you to judge the life i live, i am not perfect and dont tend to be, but before you point fingers make sure your hands are clean.-bob marley


Loving him,
fills me up with sorrow,
unable to sleep,
because im contently thinking,
if there is a tomorrow.

Loving him,
breaks me down,
so far that my last breath is seeping through the cracks in ground.

Loving him,
brings me internal misery,
even though our love will remain in history.

Loving him,
is a never ending road,
that im lost on,
and where i stand is where my heart is drawn.
The chalk will soon fade and where will i be?

Loving him,
has me so confused,
who did i use to be before there was a you and me?

Loving him,
makes my heart bleed,
and bleed but all i can do is plead my love.

Loving him,
brings more tears each and everyday.
when will this sorrow finally fade away?

Loving him,
has me so deep,
that all i ever do is weep and weep.

Loving him,
is the hardest thing that i have ever done,
but he is just another obstacle i must overcome.

Loving him,
has made me so weak,
eat,breath,think, or sleep.

Loving him,
is not like anything i planned,
how come he was the only one in demand?

Loving him,
is over and done.

Leaving him,
is now number one.

Goodbye To Him.


The author's comments:
This was my first piece i have ever shown anyone, so please tell me, what you think. it was off the top of me head and what i am/was feeling at that moment. and yes i really did say goodbye to him : )

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