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Beautiful looks lost,
Important looks monstrous,
Deadly looks beautiful,
Nails, shards of ice,
Hope to tear,
Hope to claw at,
The window pain.
Heart with steel,
Company's proud,
Look what you've done!
Look what you've done!
Tears now,
Too late, too late,
Look what you've done.
Look what you've done.
Make me proud,
It says,
But where's,
The voice?
Lost,
Lost is the voice,
Lost, found?!
No.
Lost in the oil,
Lost in its blood,
Lost in tin mind,
Forever.
Get me back,
Swell the swollen,
Balance of power,
With what?
Knife.
Shiny glint.
Help.





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valeriemarie94 said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 2:24 pm
wow i love this. simply love this. i'm speechless i cant describe how great and worded this poem is . Keep up the good work :)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 3:42 am
Thankyou so much!!!!
 
liv.laf.love13 said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 10:35 pm
wow! nothing can describe how wo nderful this is all of your writing pieces r just awesome
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 12:36 pm
Thanks so much!!
 
Angelica H. said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 4:58 pm
This is really good i love reading your poems:)))
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 6:17 pm
Thanks!!! :)
 
silent_reader said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 4:13 pm
youre a really good writer
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 6:17 pm
Thankyou!!
 
myworld10 said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 8:30 pm
Beautiful!
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 6:16 pm
Thanks so much!!
 
myworld10 replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 7:15 pm
you have a good writing style. I wish I had a good one. :/
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 9:43 pm
U do!!!     
 
myworld10 replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 7:11 pm
What do you mean I do? I don't exactly understand you here.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 9, 2010 at 10:06 pm
I mean ur def an amazing writer!!!
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 9, 2010 at 10:07 pm
Maybe u just dont know it yet :)
 
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