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I'm Falling

June 29, 2010
By DoubleIdentity BRONZE, Fort Bragg, North Carolina
DoubleIdentity BRONZE, Fort Bragg, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Without that mask
Upon your face
I see the real you
The one that God made.

Without the shadiness,
Or somewhere to hide.
But just you,
An empty shell of lies.


I'm falling,
and this time,
I know I'll hit hard.
You're the only one that can save me.
Hurry, I'm falling.
Trying to use my God given wings
They somehow won't work- they're broken.
Hurry, I'm falling.
Didn't I tell you,
no one else understands enough
to save me like you can.
Almost to the ground now
Hurry, I'm falling.
Please save me.
I'm scared.
I'll die.
Hurry, I'm falling.
I'm so close to the ground now,
I've given up hope.
It's okay you didn't save me,
I shouldn't have relyed on you for so much.
I'm falling.
Why haven't I hit the ground yet?
I should be dead now.
... I'm not falling.
I look up at who saved me.
I smile cause you did it again.
I don't know how, but you pulled it off.
Thank you.
For everything.

The author's comments:
i wrote this about my best friend.

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