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The Fighter Man

once upon a time .. there was a fighter man
his boss was killed ... so he started to make a plan
he took his boss's place ... the place was full of grace
he tried to maintain ... a regime full of pain
he said that the regime will be more just .. but i find this words un able to trust
he ruined the future .. of the doctor and the butcher
he crashed people's dreams .. much more than it seems
he took us by surprise .. to an era of disguise
so old he is to take .. any good choice to make
he now wants to go ... and his son wants the show
the puppets are the people .. in this scenario of evil
he wants people to be .. as the needle in the sea
30 years have passed ... and the people have to shut up
but i am writing these lines .. just for the people to get up
stand up for your rights ... stand up for your thoughts
the blessed man will leave ... and we just need your votes :)





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 12:14 pm
This is so great!! i love it and the hidden meaning!! could u please rate and check out my work?? thatd be great!! thanks and ur so good!!
 
FadyElsayed replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 6:31 pm
Thank You For Your Words :) , I Have Read One Of Yours And It Is Really Good ... Thanks Again And Keep Up The Good Work :)
 
Aidana KG said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 3:25 pm
It was so hard to understand the meaning of the first lines...I think the tresure of this poem is it's end=) Now I got the whole meaning! And I have to say that it's GREAT!
 
FadyElsayed replied...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 6:08 pm
That Is The Point Of This Poem .. You Will Only Understand It At The Last Few Lines .. I am Glad You Liked It .. Thanks For Your Comment :)
 
huby said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 8:57 pm
AWESOMEE ,, just kep it upp :))
 
FadyElsayed replied...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 6:07 pm
Thanks :) ... Wait For More Soon .
 
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