Ode to a Finger in an Automatic Door This work is considered exceptional by our editorial staff.

July 26, 2010
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Machine
Slow, inexorable,
Lumbering down its beaten track,
A vertical avalanche of crushing iron
Gears spinning their lives away
In a wall of mindless metal
No emotion, no remorse,
As it closes in
On your finger again.





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DreamChild said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 12:39 pm
haha this is really funny(: nice work, keep it up
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 11:58 am
Wow this is so amazing!! u look deepper and theres so many layers to it!! could u please rate and check out my work?? thatd be great!! thanks and ur so good!!
 
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