Distracted

July 26, 2010
By katie123 PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
katie123 PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 22 photos 13 comments

It’s hard to think,
When thoughts of you cloud my view.
It’s hard to see,
When all I see is you.
It’s hard to feel,
When all I feel is your lips on mine.
It’s hard to breathe,
When my heart thunders into oblivion.
It’s hard to walk,
When I imagine your arms around me.
It’s hard to act normal,
Because everything has changed.

I see you whenever I close my eyes.
I miss you when I’m alone in the darkness.
I smell you when I inhale.
I taste you when I exhale.
I feel you with every step I take.
I realize I need you, when you’re already gone.



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on Aug. 18 2010 at 8:44 pm
katie123 PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 22 photos 13 comments
thanks a lot!!!!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 8:04 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

Cool. I know what you measn. nice writing

on Aug. 18 2010 at 3:00 pm
katie123 PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 22 photos 13 comments

thanks gurl love the name

 


Shnitzle said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 2:58 pm
Loved it girly!!! it's amazing!!!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 12:30 pm
katie123 PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 22 photos 13 comments
thanks, i read and rated your work!! love it!! we have similar styles!! so your really good also

on Aug. 18 2010 at 12:27 pm
katie123 PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 22 photos 13 comments
thanks, i read, and rated your work!! your really good!!!!!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 11:50 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

I love this!!! its so relatable!! could u please rate and check out my work?? thatd be great!! thanks and ur so good!!

on Aug. 17 2010 at 9:34 pm
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.
-jesus

WOW. iI KNow exactly what you mean!!! iI feel the same way!!!! Haha. :) good job!!! check oUt some of my work? :)


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