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Golden Hearts

They say all is fair in love and war
But those words come from carnivores

What do the people who hide away
eating grass and lush greens say

They'd say love and war are far from just
war is fighting, love but lust

True fairness lives in hearts so dear
turned gold from bravery and lack of fear





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Robyn97 said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 7:37 pm
I love the cadence, and the theme, and........the whole dang thing, I guess!
 
redhairCatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 6:43 pm
This poem has a great beat to it. I could recite it out loud! I also like the message that you promoted on love and war! Very creative!
 
PerfectMGymnast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 12:47 am
another great poem! i like your style and this was written so beautifully! :)
 
iloverachel said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 2:03 pm
your writing inspires me. it really speaks to the soal with imagry. i read everything you write. this is just lovely
 
RFrocker23 replied...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 2:57 pm
random stranger, your comments make me warm and fuzzy on the inside.
 
StaraClassic said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 2:49 pm
this is....beautiful in so many ways. i love it. and its true. we shouldnt be fighting, when there is already so many wars already
 
RFrocker23 replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 9:21 am
Thank you so much! And I totally agree.
 
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