United

July 22, 2010
By sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."


I feel you around me, gradually digging yourself under my skin.
I sense your presence all around, even when I can't physically see you.
Your essence is heavy, almost too dark to be detected.

I wish I could see your aura, show it to everyone I know,
Draw it on the skylights, on all the walls of our foundation.
Your honey-like voice softly murmurs a whisper in my ear:
"Everything's going to be all right. Just leave it all to me.I'll take care
of everything."
Your words make my skin tingle, my lips quiver.
Because you and I both know,
We have to work together, be united as one once again.
Otherwise,
nothing cannot, and never
will be alright.


The author's comments:
This is about two people who show everyone that they don't exactly like each other, but actually do alot & know they have to work together in order to make things right.
They're both just too stubborn:) Plz rate/comment.

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on Mar. 21 2013 at 11:22 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

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