July 20, 2010
Just a small one,
Seperated from the others.

A World forever torn,
a life apart from his siters and brothers.

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sleeplessdreamer said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 6:01 pm

The poem was good, and I really liked the fact it was so short. But it really makes you think, because you don't know what is going on. 

I am amazed at back story to this poem, how your mind worked with the fish analogy... just thought I'd commend you for your thought process. 

Great job. Check out my work if you ever get the chance!

CynthiaLovelyy replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 8:18 pm
Thanks. :) But that wasen't the whole thing, it was a little longer. But I might leave it since it is ''mysterious''. Thanks again sleeplessdreamer. I love your work. It's beautiful.
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