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Rubbing the small blemish on the very tip
of her nose with hands dyed green by
those new Shrek fruit roll-ups, she sings
through pomegranate lips decorated
with small shards of sour cherry
flavoured Tootsie-pops, skips with thin,
pale legs, naked save for pink Hello
Kitty underwear, teases the new
dog who speaks through wrinkled
black lips under floppy Oreo McFlurry
ears; he knocks her over, her blonde
translucent hair sliding behind
her shoulders and a slobber-generous
kiss is planted on her cheek.





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PaolaC. said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 8:05 pm
I can really picture this in my head with your descriptions. I really like it :)
 
Uglification This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 8:27 pm
Thank you. :D
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 5:21 pm
It made me so happy to read this! I can honestly say that you have one of the most unique writing styles that I have ever read on this website. I loved this poem, so good job.
 
Uglification This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 4:45 pm
Thank you!
 
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